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Old 01-23-2014, 09:53 PM   #2
Pent uP
Robin Williams of Fallen Victims
 
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what the fuck is a spooks mcgee? that shit sounds racist as fuck LMFAO.

promise ring was such a stretched rhyme for BW. heart skips is dope. Dug the first verse. dope sauce

Song metaphor was dope. flows sick. there she goes/shadows connection was dope. dope so far

this chorus is really annoying to me both at a BPM and singer standpoint.

confirming face is dope. rest of the verse was solid.

the hook is really annoying to me. beat is cool. I can't decide exactly where I stand with it but word.
The levels felt a little low overall but other then that...
dug it ..good yob
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