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Old 01-23-2014, 06:25 PM   #14
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DARPA Chief reference brought me back. Scheming was cool in that line and the Frank castle line as well. Flow was great, but I remember your rhymes being just titch more complex in the past. Nitpicky, still very good. I don't think your throwaway lines were better, necessarily, but they were different than this and maybe a little more interesting. I was expecting a bit more length to the piece due to the way you hyped it up but this was a dope little flex piece, better than most. Feed seems a little more critical than I intended, I usually critique high level writers to a steeper standard. This was better than most drops here.
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