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Old 01-23-2014, 11:10 AM   #2
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this bar whispers, 'down the hatch' as my scars shiver
i could drink the dead air of this harsh winter
the feeling is fertilizer to this yard's blister
charges litter, it'd turn a passionate heart bitter
too late to start with her, fill my casket with hard liquor
if i black out early, obviously it gets dark quicker
speed racer, i see tracers as the stars flicker
why so redundant? always breakin' the bandage
smother face while my medication's taken advantage

^^Nice shit.

i'll quit the sauce when this tequila worm paddles free..

^^Slick.

puzzeled victims, irregular alcoholic spewin' troubled wisdom
mouth puddle's drippin - fresh case, only a couple missin'
slept filthy, pled guilty to a life sentence of double fistin'

^^Likin' that.

Tight stuff man...old or not it's good to see a longer length piece from you, there's some great imagery and creativeness here...word usage is also nice with it.I could of quoted more and/or different sections but what I did I was feelin' most, great read bro.

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