Fuck man...this was ill.Ima echo what dull said and say your schemin' was awesome...content is nice as all shit, talk about keepin' a piece consistent phew!...I really don't wanna quote stuff 'cause as a whole it's brilliant but I'll try pick out some shit for ya.
He arose a nose ahead, although his heir's of commoners.
The mare attached, firey flare intact,
They bear attacks to repair the tears the tyrants ripped.
Gladiator glacial steps,
Cards all placed til ace was left.
The burden placed on a mage's steps,
"I come for whom has claimed his hex."
The aging mage exchanged a vexed
Expression... "vague, this entire age is of death..."
^^Flames.
Each crimson spray indicated his decaying within.
Til the fantastic that prey were at bay, to the dismay of him.
Left this baron domain, with no water or grain,
Pangs remain with no bains to reign against.
Insane, what one became
was the same, as flames of his shame radiated within.
^^Dope closer.
Great read fam...thoroughly enjoyable in every way.
Stay upwards.
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