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Old 01-22-2014, 06:41 AM   #7
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This one was excellent and it is fun to read a fast upload from you. Now the next level can be engaged - two single 100 syllable rhyme schemes. How many are possible before the line itself is too long to make sense? You have written before it was a rhyme scheme with 20 words but is 40-50 too much? Would enjoy to see something ambitious and a little bit experimental.
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