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Old 03-08-2013, 08:24 PM   #6
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Dope battle you two. Honestly this is really fucking close imo.
zygote: The man who made me look like Papa Doc, how goes it? Well I gotta say you had a slick rhyme scheme and dope flow as always. I mean it was damn near perfect in terms of that...but as you said in the last line I got tired of hearing you complain honestly. What are you complaining about you're undefeated lol. But besides the content of this piece I loved it. I mean the way you drop each line looks a feels different from any writer here. Good drop as always.
Genocide: Geno the way you started off this piece was dope. Multis were dope throughout with a great scheme in the verse as well. The flow was dope as hell until the mention zygote line to me. Rehearsal/ zygote to doesn't rhyme to me, maybe it's an accent thing. But besides that I have no complaint about this piece. Props.

As I've said before this is a close battle, zygote had the better flow, geno had the better content. Honestly to me this seems like a tie but if I gotta pick a winner I'd go with.........fuck.........I'm gonna say zygote but I have a feeling this battle could go either way
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