cool piece bruv. and props on the Del avy haha. Del is my fav rapper probly. this drop was a little different which is always good to see, painted a picture pretty well. you snuck in alot of good vocab which all contributed to the dark grimy feel of this: "insidious, abomination, distorted, pestering" Pretty cool read man. Mechanically it wasn't outstanding, but your bar lengths were consistent, could be converted to audio most likely if u tried
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My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.
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