nik had fingers crossed and french tips. utmost had his 1st two w/ his opener being lotb, creativity wise. but unfortunately, his wording was a little off. like the opener was still okay. but the 2nd bar just fell flat towards the end. and then ut got a little less creative towards the end. if he had kept up his fresh bars, i woulda given it to him, even tho nik's wording was better. but yea, like this, i got nik in a very close one. ut really has bars tho. he just needs a little cleaner wording. he might be c. gaffle tbh lol. props to both tho. cool little read.
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