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Old 03-08-2013, 02:34 PM   #10
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Harbaugh's parents was ill, but the rest of the verse was played too safe. the leopard/pussy line, you already knew was played, but I liked the flip. The closer was kinda awkward, you could have condensed it to make it read a bit better.

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Jap market I had to read twice, but it was worth it. LOTB imo, nik's Harbaugh line wit a close second. I liked the creativity, or at least whatever creativity you can put into a battle against someone who's had every insult thrown his way. Old jokes obv don't cut the bill wit Nik anymore, and I don't feel like you did much with that line. The other 4 made up for it tho, as that was the only true miss in my eyes.

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