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Originally Posted by Frank
obvious hate votes from a gang of inferior writers
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i voted on your battle
i never read your writing before to my knowledge, or nigmas
i thought you were both terrible if that helps you out at all. you showed you could write with some solid couplets but if you cant objectively see how bad it is than there is no point in engaging with you. you lose any semblance of sanity in your writing towards the end, you forced and even made up words to keep some semblance of the same rhyme scheme going which wouldve been OK, if you didnt lose all context of what was actually happening in the story
now that your battles over explain what even happened? some virgin sold her virgiinity to a dude and then they get pulled over by a cop and thats followed by a sex acid trip scene which ends with someone getting shot
you suck nigga