[Witty]

This is going to be a short one, forgive me.

Nigma - This was a cool verse, not your best but it was a nice read, my main problem is some of the forced rhymes, there were a couple of instances when I just couldn't find the rhyme at all, the line ending with garbage being the main one. That was really the only disappointment in your piece, after that it picked up tho and I really like the run you went on from there to the end of the verse, you wrote it well I have to agree that I have seen you write a lot better in the past. The saving grace of your piece was the narrative, it was easy to follow and well crafted. Cool read, not bad by any stretch of the imagination, but I have seen you do better so I believe it is beneath your normal standard.

Frank - I think you rushed this verse, that is really the only explanation I have because it started of so well, but as I got further in to the piece the story started to make less and less sense. Was he having sex with the girl while the cop was there? I just don't really understand what was happening in the last paragraph.... I followed it from the first up until the second but the third just lost me completely. You wrote it well and the rhyming was impressive, and I guess I can see the connection to the topic, tho vague...but the way you ended just didn't make sense, and that's why I think you may have rushed the piece, you can definitely do better.

Voting for Nigma