Netcees - View Single Post - ROUND ONE: (14)Split Eight vs. (19)Veritas - (SPLIT EIGHT WINS 5-2)

CopyPat · 01-19-2014, 01:55 PM

interesting. pretty cool pic

split, your flow/structure, scheming was pretty dope man. but i honestly had really no idea wtf u were saying. i am not poetic and never pretended to be, so i didn't relate to this at all. I'm sure it wasn't, but to me it just seemed like a bunch of random elements and references put together lol sorry dude, just not my style. I kindof understand the jungle escaping you part as it relates to the picture but then that was really the only thing that related to the pic.

Veritas, this was a pretty straight forward approach, which i liked. To me as a topical, you incorporated way more elements of this PIC to this verse, which being a picture only round i think was the point??? your story had me engaged the whole time.. splits i had trouble doing that. You wrote about a lot of relate-able subjects to people and u created an interesting and original concept about the pic. split killed u on the technical aspect of writing, which for the most part i am all about, but ur simpler approach lyrically worked well in this case with not trying to overdo this. idunno, everything was just very fluid and not over complicated. The last thing that i really liked about veritas verse was that he took a pretty rotten story and actually gave it a happy ending lol, so i liked that aswell. felt finished. plus the last bar was really dope with the bigger cages.

VOTE: Baldy

01-19-2014, 01:55 PM	#10
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	interesting. pretty cool pic split, your flow/structure, scheming was pretty dope man. but i honestly had really no idea wtf u were saying. i am not poetic and never pretended to be, so i didn't relate to this at all. I'm sure it wasn't, but to me it just seemed like a bunch of random elements and references put together lol sorry dude, just not my style. I kindof understand the jungle escaping you part as it relates to the picture but then that was really the only thing that related to the pic. Veritas, this was a pretty straight forward approach, which i liked. To me as a topical, you incorporated way more elements of this PIC to this verse, which being a picture only round i think was the point??? your story had me engaged the whole time.. splits i had trouble doing that. You wrote about a lot of relate-able subjects to people and u created an interesting and original concept about the pic. split killed u on the technical aspect of writing, which for the most part i am all about, but ur simpler approach lyrically worked well in this case with not trying to overdo this. idunno, everything was just very fluid and not over complicated. The last thing that i really liked about veritas verse was that he took a pretty rotten story and actually gave it a happy ending lol, so i liked that aswell. felt finished. plus the last bar was really dope with the bigger cages. VOTE: Baldy __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.