[Wise Wiggles]

Let me start this off in saying I appreciate the lengthy breakdowns you have given some of my pieces. Even if it wasn't long. Your feedback always seems to be genuine and un tainted for you are trying to better the writer through opening up their "writing horizons" so to speak. It doesn't go unnoticed, at least not by me. Thank you. Now on to this steaming pile of jerk booth trail mix. This was the best written posted in the first round of The Winter Topical. Fig's young and knew he didn't have what it took to conquer this sexual Goliath. He hid his face in a corner. No surprise though and obviously I'm not taking a thing away from fig's craft. It's just painfully obv that Blacketh might be the only one who stands a chance matched up against you. You did everything that people can't do with this pic that you were giving. I feel you got the better pic. But I also am an impulse thinker and the more I looked and thought about my pic, the less I wanted to rip it to shreds and stomp it's light out. Maybe even drop a luger (lougui) lugee. Idk how to spell it. Whatever. Alright. I'm laying on my buddies living room floor, in a sleeping bag, dehydrated, socks/jeans/hoodie on. Rubbing my feet together trying to get some last bit of Molly that's circulating my pores to kick in. Just a FYI. I'm hungover. I was cut off before I even entered the bar last night and I was thoroughly disgustapated over. The bouncers were like a mean 315. Fat fucks. I could uppercut force fed his nutsuck but I wanted to remain somewhat civil, even though they decided to give me the shaft before even getting to know me? Anyways. You incorporated every aspect of the picture in this! Bloody tampon man. It was something no other did. People were given fucking open canvas's, ready to get gang banged and all of them except for maybe you and two others, imo (and maybe myself idk) shit diarrhea all over it. Idk if I've said it but this was right around my fav of flirt round verses. I will edit this later on and actually give you feed. Sorry.