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Old 01-18-2014, 10:29 PM   #10
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This was an i.teresting battle

never got into both readers before really
trap seems new to me reminds me of southern rap
copy seems obsessed with structure & multis too often

but I must say that trap did not disappointment due to my judgments on his name
he seemed to capture a glimmering idea as easily as...well a snare would a small animal
quite an interesting read to say the least.
the way that you brought the piece together was an interesting take on things
very nicely done. i will have to read more from you.

Copy on the other hand stepped out of his comfort zone slightly
and I must say he brought some energy unseen from previous work
I'm unsure if he's elevating to levels I have not seen from him
or he is just pulling a cover over everyone's eyes masking his true talents
regardless the flow of his piece went well with the topic at hand and brought a breath of fresh. air to the norm
nicely done

as far as my vote goes I feel that trap edged it out with a different yet coherent piece.
not saying I didn't enjoy or not understand Copys verse. I just felt. trap was more comfortable
he also had a stronger stride toward the end. nice battle fellas
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