Two of my fave writers
one unorthodox. the other an over achiever since the beginning
Wise you delivered an excellent piece
its interesting to see you in the league
I feel like you have a great chance of making i to the semis
your style compliments the picture well
your play on subject matter is very smooth
Vivid you always have a different way of doing things
I like that. this week is the opening and I'm unsure if you are playi.g it safe
not saying you didn't approach the topic well. just unlike you.
the flow of your piece is consistent as well as intriguing for what it is
but it lacks that vivid touch I am used to
regardless I feel this was a great opening bout for both writers
its fun to see the approach taken as well as the clash in style
you two have came to impress
but due to his pristine touch I am going to give this round to Wise
nice battle fellas
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