Ima have to make this quick due to my disappearing phone privilege
as well as a lack of a computer...
I felt that Lars verse was spot on from the ending
didn't have much lag in the flow which was nice
the fluid-ness in the piece is what kept me motivated to read
I feel like he brought in a strong verse
as for Objective I felt his verse was nice as well
although through mid verse I felt confused
maybe it was just how I read what it built up to at that point
or maybe its due to reading the jumble of words quickly
either way I felt towards the end you were back on track
quite a good save if you ask me
although I feel there's more to say unfortunately I can't as of now
but I do feel both writers came correct investing time and skill to the topic at hand
nice battle but I have to give it to Lars for less complaints
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