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Old 01-18-2014, 09:23 PM   #8
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vulgar.

reading verse after verse after verse after verse if i pulled the verse from a hat. 9 out of 10 times I can spot the vulgar verse. the 1 time I can't. it's a zygote misprint. or a losing championship verse.

elite portrayal

Fortresses and bazaars in Zaire pulverized, the fires smoldered
Violent cultures of tribal warlords, child soldiers, fortified, ages 4-to-5
If it's cold outside of the warm cocoon and you awaken, mortified
Avoid the warring hives, and resume the trek into that formless guise

slick scheming here^

overall this verse really resonated with me. a continuation of the good word. and I couldn't of said it better myself


innovator

the blood soaked air, we breathe in the scene.
Red sons under red dawns.
as the streets bleed. the trees breathe in the rot from the bodies posed.
dancing through a grenade ball. we waltz to each bullet thrown.

dope^

innovator, this was a kingsman tale told from the noble citizens lowly perch...a merchant of fish - you are a salesman of meager beginnings who sneaks into the march, through the barracks and walks by the side of a great leader for a brief moment in time.

vulgar was that great leader.

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