[Pent uP]

Trap -- You went the exact route I expected you to go. Not down the child being a demon thing but your style seems predictable to me based off the last few reads I have of you. A little less gore-y than usual but still the same. Flow was fluid and the imagery was cool but it felt detached of characterization and emotion. Just my opinion though.

Copy - Such an easy read, with twinkles of brilliance. Couple ideas I wrote about this week too, which I thought was cool/funny/positive. I think you needed to go deeper into the point - not the examples but the repercussions and reactions and stuff. I like these soap box type pieces I just feel like you were too short with it. Like I said I wish it would've involved into more like earths bitchslap or something..IDK but yeah strong conceptualization just needs to be a bit more in depth.

Overall -- I didn't really get into trap's verse. The genre bores me. The writing was good from him but nothing amazing. I liked a lot of the things that made up Copy's verse I just dont feel the entirety of the verse is as strong as it could be. I'm going against the grain so far because I was both writers were toe to toe in mechanics and the traps content bored me.

Vote -- Copy