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Originally Posted by Rawn MD
i can respect that @ Split
i do feel like ur generalizing off of like 2 peices though, but fair enough |
I also remember your shark diving verse, and vaguely something off Netcees 1
biggest complaint would be weird grammar/ word combinations (they clout) and occasionally weirdly out of sync concepts (pushing rock around town like Sisyphus... Sisyphus was a dumb bitch tho so it looks like youre calling yourself a martyr or w/e dumb shit he did)
I'd say a lot of your problems could be fixed if you stopped cutting necessary words out for brevity