[big baby]

i thought mord was uh oh, but idk who he is now, oh well.

pinky broke.

zyg - a filtering presence convening your skillset through an array of microscopic nebulas. you impressed here and approached with confidence, being the first one to drop a verse, i think even on opening day, neither caring if you dropped first or second, or anything. that is confidence in your writing and you explored that area well. your verse deviated in my opinion, but i could catch the waft of your initial explanation, by a few filtered and concetrated 2nd and 3rd reads. It read a bit off center, especially when the correlation between picture and writing was such a hard differentiation to make.

mordycai had the most solid verse, not necessarily saying he had the best verse, but it just seemed straightforward, with no flashy theatrics, and just displayed his main strength, consistency. though the imagination drifted throughout, i feel he/she could have made it a better and more interesting battle, the mechancis made the initial reading of the verse suffer, as zyg presented a blade etched from diamond. zyg presented a more detailed, finished, and crisper verse opposed to his solid opponent, and therefore i have to give it to him. sorry for the mediocre breakdown.