So zyg threw some crazy futuristic death gladiator game at us with funny little chime ins from the sponsor's/announcer. Lol the bottled water line was clever. I enjoyed it because it was fast. Fun. And kept me intrigued with it for a number of different reasons. A really unique take on it imo. A comedic mad max. Bravo. Now mordycai gave us a slower paced description of a shipwrecked captain person who crashes into a desert and goes looney and all that goodness of hot dry places. It wasn't bad but it wasn't grabbing my attention through out, as in there weren't a lot of elements presented in it. Metaphors. Voice (as in raw emotion or reaction) so it was more figurative of the mind. The mechanics weren't bad either. It's just hard to top what zyg brought to the table w/o implementing some of things mentioned. Good match up, I got Zygote taking this with the GoreShowOfFunnys. Pce.
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blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"
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