[Objective]

Trap: Not the best intro I've seen but it definitely does what it's supposed to. I usually comment the piece as I keep reading the shit but I couldn't really do that here. The entire piece with the picture in mind is a metaphorical one which is hard to accomplish, yet you did it with excellence. I haven't really read much from you, and to be honest, I didn't expect much either... But damn, I was wrong about that.

It's truly a unique and creative written with a decent flow that was easy to follow. I really enjoyed the read and thought it was refreshing to see someone use the picture to paint a metaphorical piece and put the topic given to full use. Dopeness!

CopyPat: I haven't started to read anything yet, but I'm already sort of expecting to see some crazy rhymes in this one. What I'm interested to see is if you can write topicals as I don't think it's your usual steez. But I'm looking forward to it.

And just as I thought your rhymescheme is dope as fuck and the flow is on point. This is by far your greatest quality in my opinion. What I didn't like however is that the four first bars of your piece starts either with ''the'' or a variation of it, it kinda get a bit repetitive.

''Elevated population, excavation, water wasting
Forestation, mass extinction, porous, arid, land is achin’''
^Really enjoyed this couplet.

Mother earth and pollution topics have been written sometimes before, but I felt you stood out in terms of how you presented the piece as a whole, but the closure came out kinda weak as I couldn't really get ''fuck off'' to really work with ''must stop'' as the sound to the last letter in ''stop'' is kinda too brutal to really work for me. But ye, overall it was a cool read and I enjoyed it. Hope to you see in future topical tournaments/leagues and see what you come up with.

Vote: Trap. I felt his approach to the topic was a bit more unique, and I love creative shit. Although CopyPat had a better rhymescheme I felt Trap surpassed him on the concept and content as a whole. Refreshing battle to read, dope shit.