[PancakeBrah]

Wise Ways-

I haven't read every verse this week, yet, but this was the best so far. Your writing style lends itself to a character sketch to the point it's nearly unfair. Ninety percent of your verse stayed inert and I was interested the entire way through. Your emphasis on rhyme schemes was obvious but you were able to couch it within content so fluidly that I barely noticed.

"Glamour. Sexy. Pro. Her camera's essence? Whoa.
Hardly an anorexic clone. The standard? Dresses. Vogue."

"Been fly. Tink never had to glue or staple wings.
Her eyes bleed a perfect chartreuse for Maybelline
Sparkles, rouge & navel rings."

"I mean a lot of girls are hot. She was Celsius bomb
Team player? Before you develop a bond she'd melt the baton
Had Chanel in her palm..&
You followed her eyes out the window. The devil's in blonde"

You incorporated the entire picture by excluding most of it. The devil is in the details; some people need action but this verse shows that the exploration of detail is just as meaningful as proposed 'depth'. You very well may have keyed this but regardless I think it was the right route to take. I enjoyed the exploration and detail, and the technical proficiency only enhanced it. Great verse.

Vividlyvague-

Very Frank. Your word usage and dialogue deployment was deft. You painted a picture that matched every aspect expected in regards to the topic. You touched on the emotional aspect that your opponent neglected, and flourished in it. Dialogue is a driving force in real writing, but I felt basing your verse and writing on it in this scenario was a bit short-sighted.

A good battle. Wise wrote one of my favorite verses of the round, due to personal preferences (character sketches > stories)

v/ Wise Ways