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trap this was cool. on the deeper side of the topical type spectrum which is cool, but can lead to a boring read. but you obviously know what you are doing the schemes were dope and pretty solid, one line that sticks out is the thrown down in a hole i felt the word down was unnecesary and broke the scheme made it read a little bumpy, but thats the only line that springs to mind. i get it tho cuz you went up HIGH with his soul and then DOWN in a hole, so i could see why you used it but i dont think it was necesarry, but word this was slick yo

copypat this was cool. flow was on point for the most part throughout. on some mother nature introspective shit with humans ruining it all and all that it was cool. i dunno not really much to say

i think it was kind of even honestly. copypats read better cuz it was simpler and the flow was cool, but traps flow was cool too its just since his was a little deeper you gotta think a little more indepth with it and to be honest it made copypats a little more enjoyable. but if im looking at them for which is the better verse i like traps more with the pic and all that, i dunno im dumb but i took it like a person castin out there demons or some shit having a mental breakthrough at that site or whatever, and copys was just about the earth and shit unless it went over my head and its deeper than what i took it as.

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