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Old 01-13-2014, 06:41 PM   #14
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- tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
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- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
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- related to genghis khan
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Originally Posted by oats View Post
think of your verse as a hamburger. Your content is the meat patty - no doubt it's the most important part of the burger. This is what you should worry about first. Understand that writing is a process, and it takes even the most talented people a lot of time and dedication to arrive at a point where they're happy with their own writing.

In any case, use simple, single-syllable rhymes at first if you need; I can't stress enough that the most important thing is having something interesting to say (good story, insightful analysis, honest reflection, etc). Your concept is the bun (good to have at least somewhat of an idea of what you're trying to write before writing - the concept, like the bun, keeps it all together). Multis and internal rhymes and all those more complex aspects of writing mechanics, those are the condiments. They make a good verse better, but they aren't enough to make a good verse out of a shitty one.

To answer your question, no, not every syllable needs to rhyme. But what the others are trying to say is this: asking this question is missing the point. Start with the content and the rest will fall into place. I've seen way too many people who use a ton of multis and suck royally at writing a good verse. Don't be one of those guys.
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Originally Posted by greed View Post
If mentioned in a discussion its who'd still use wordy lines and act all dope
Then again hes had this schtick so long he like bb da bb da bb thats all folks
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