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Originally Posted by Simon SeversTons
Sorry for the delay. Caught up on something else, much focus wasnt on this.
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- Kevin McCallister is played by Macaulay Culkin in Home Alone.
At 10:50, here we go...
I present: Simon deading this mark - so fuck if this clown had wrote a rhyme for me!
Since he's "Jim?" Then Im "flexing with bars" with-out even "sculpting my physique!"
Funny how Jimmy wanna type with a hot free, but his shook type wouldnt CROSS ME!
His last battle WHEW - its like Jim has a bad knack with food, the way "Ry's wasnt salty!"
(rice/Rys=Ryan 12)
^ This is his setups in his battle with Ryan. YIKES.
Jims not clever at battlin'! Plus his ^ "setups were all over the place" - "Kevin McCallister"
But we dont gotta look at a "skateboard" to know that youre a "REGULAR" ...amatuer!
JESUS, youve written your lines weak... AND ALSO dont scribble more rhymes PLEASE!
So I dont mean craved frozen dessert whenever you see "Jimmy's on ice?" *SCREAM*
G'luck, Jimmy.
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Is this a verse? It looks like the remnants of a peer-editing session from a high school introduction to poetry class.
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