the opener was dope.
With our eyes burning - seeing is not just believing, its learning,
Its turning the pages n wondering the thoughts we're solemnly earning
and ya I feel like that bar is worded perfectly. disagree with the person that said solemly should have been left out. the syllable count is 16 then 17. without solemly it would have been 16 then 14. I think it works better the way you had it. anyway this was a nice drop but it dropped off noticeably as it progressed. good read though.
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