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Old 01-10-2014, 08:08 PM   #11
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I liked the word play, very precise rhyme coupling and a sick flow.

My favorite part seemed to be a reference from Pennywise the clown from Steven Kings It? "we all float down here"???

"the sidewalk. If they care too look: I care. Many don’t.
…A penny floats for my thoughts"

Great read!

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