Would sell his soul if he could change the past
And a few of these mistakes made over a taste of ass
Face the facts, its one of those funnier days he's had
Raised his glass, drank until the pain was trashed
A brainiac, who stays stuck in his head for days
His time bombs tickin over these beds he's made
A bitchs feminine ways creates his fetish for hate
If he'd of let'er be he'd be a lot better today
^^Slick Geno.
I've already commented on the second verse so Ima just feed the first one...again emotion is the drivin' force behind this, and content wise it's pretty clean.Good use of multies kept the flow smooth and I like that the structure is such that it makes for a very fluent read...would probably say I felt the first slightly more than the second but overall shits nice with it man, I'm sure there are numerous people that could relate in some way or another...great stuff hombre.
Stay upwards.
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