Word, thanks for all the feed! Specially you @
ZYG. Agree with everything you're saying, should have googled the word or at least double checked ''scripture''. Inspiration hit and I should have been more aware about the fact that some things that seems ''ok'' to me, isn't when it comes down to it. Going to try to be more coherent in the future. It's kinda similar to a norwegian word I just happened to think of when I wrote it. I realize how badly I failed when I read your feed, haha. And everything you said was on point. Dope shit.
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Orc: Ye, I do, but when I choose to write in a different language I kinda feel like I should be able to do better at it as well. Appreciate the read and that you enjoyed some of the lines. Thanks for the props as well.
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jdeek: Word, I often experiment with stuff in the OM though, so I'm not sure if you'll find anything to your liking here. The topical tournament might be more interesting in regards of that. This isn't my usual style, just trying to add more shit to my bag of tricks so any feed is valuable to me. I get what you're saying. Thanks for taking your time to read & feed, appreciated!
Rofl @ Scripter.