(All extensions are always O.K.)
I fucking despise how it’s all about who writes more multiple rhymes,
I feel like discussion and concept is thrown off to the side,
What you write is less important than how you structure your lines,
Do you agree? Or is this just a product of my dysfunctional mind?
Am I primed to find errors because of my work and sceptical nature?
Call me cynical-miserable, flowers smell sweet but it’s just Benzene chemical vapors,
I view gullibility and susceptible behavior as an unacceptable failure,
You praise ambiguous writing that reads like random text generators.
C.D.M. should have won last week - the LORD was a good approach to pursue,
I finished my writing with a circular statement “the truth is the truth”
All that I wrote meant nothing; it was just a pointless review,
“A slogan or phrase” designed to say nothing but bring enjoyment to you.
And if you feel uncomfortable it means a good topic is just discussed,
I initially wrote about our earth’s formation from a spinning cloud of rocks and dust,
Here’s an excerpt: “Call it a cosmic mush,
Gravity drew heavy elements inwards and they got crushed.”
But then I remembered the last two times against genocide where I followed in this direction,
I compared art to religion – it got called a history lesson,
It was just self-expression, contrasting two different things - a simple progression,
I enjoy criticism but hate it when people completely miss the connection.
But forget complaining, it’s probably starting to get on your nerves,
Maybe you tuned out at the start and already skipped to the end of the verse.
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