or with no fuckin' feelings at all
I'll have you shieldin' your form
from my rapid wieldin' of swords
let's give what's torn a good peelin' and try to reach where your raw
now there's some ish nonexistent
like me spittin' off kinda horribly more than often, consistent
Lol those last two lines though. That's me man, sometimes i just up random shit that i know i didnt try to do perfectly or take my time on hut you know if you dont try new things and put it out there then you can't get critique and advice. I think more of the vetran cats need to help people through feed by giving advice rather than just saying "yo this was ill" or yo this was garbage" i still to this day dont fully grasp what people mean by rhyme schemes and shit, i just am kimda learning by trial and error. Anyways im getting way off subject. This was dope man, lookin forward to reading more. Peace
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