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Old 01-08-2014, 01:13 PM   #23
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you a shook fag,Ill kill you quick,don't have me misunderstood
Ill swing an axe at yew so fast with no intention of getting wood

Lacks sting. I mean not really much to word but still IMO came off statement'ish.

You a lame fool,watch some baseball, quit dickriding n get real
Been taking trips to the home of metts, never setting a foot on citi field

Not sure where you were going with this, but I don't see this as being a diss of any type? Am I missing something? Just seemed statement'ish to me.

I bet your mum & dad aint lazy parents,just kidding i know ya hateem
cuz only time they ever gave a phuck,is signing the adoption papers

Concept there, kind of liked this but the flow through me off. Is it "Hate'em" you tried to rhyme with "Papers"? Doesn't rhyme in my language (English).

So ill see ya later,cym is greater,ya battle careers a fail
With such a poor display in that cort battle ya almost garenteed for jail

I see the concept, I think you just failed to execute properly.

In the battle arena theres a modification, phuck got the job
mods supposed to increase the fun. you just bored everyone n made activity drop

Nothing here.

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gay gymnist, concepts are nothing but fag back flips
if a girl give Lotto Numbers .. her & gambling only equal a bad habbit

Came off statement'ish IMO. Concept was decent but at the same time predictable. I'm sure this has been used against him his entire career while using this "Username".

fag likes men, dude gets a chubby when he grab a pen
so if you smile in my face il Crack Smirk, so he can never do that again

Not really feeling this, basic and lacks sting.

Lot ran from our last battle, but i guess i make for this hoe
you Duck Calls more then ... Stars from A& E Red Neck Reality Show

Concept there but lack the proper execution. Still not THAT bad tho.

stop claiming you get bitches & that you nail hoes
blow ur brains out, to ruin L-Train quicker then drunk driving on railroads

I see the metaphor just debating on how it's relevant? Maybe I am missing something here, please excuse me if I did.

you want beef .. think ur hard as Phuck ur kiddin!
when we know Lots full of Bitch shit ... like parking spots for women

Terrible simile. I see the Lots/Parking but think it's poorly worded and you could have taken that in a different direction to land a nice effective punch.

IMO: I see Phuck taking this battle because of his consistency. I mean there was nothing "Jaw Dropping" but he had a few concepts that he failed to execute on. Some Name flips/creativity throughout his verse as were Lotto was just to basic for me and a lot of his material came off statement'ish. I can see both probably did not put forth an effort compared to what I have read previously from both, but as I stated, IMO Phuck wins.

MVGT: Phuck