Alvin
Bar 1-- hahaha dope play on the whole in his neck fresh flip and definitely hit home..
Bar 2-- ehh nothing really special there cause obviously it didn't happen
Bar 3-- i get this bar but it feels like your blocking instead of swinging like ur preventing him from usingn that on you which doesn't connect on him
Bar 4-- the CYN play I get it but nothing really hitting here just statementish
Bar 5-- again this is no real punch he's on balance beams w his hands ok so he is a gymnast to me that doesn't connect ..
Seen karpis come waaaaaaaaaaaaay better then this .. I'm a littles lost
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Greed
Bar 1-- he beat a vet you beat a game..? Where does that connect..?
Bar 2-- ehhh I get it which is kind of played and untrue being the fact I don't think he has lost a battle here even his verse against you was below standards still this is a miss..
Bar 3-- this bar could have been something but the execution wasn't there I like the paper work idea though
Bar4-- I liked this concept but again the execution falls short homie..
Bar 5-- I liked the wordplay the connection was jab worthy this could have been a dope bar though I feel like you rushed
Vote -- Alvin for having the better connection and actually having a quotable bar
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