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Old 01-07-2014, 08:36 PM   #4
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three dope sections in this that stood out to me as wonderful

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you've walked into meetings- intersections of paths
residing in burns upon retinas, get ahead while you nap,
got sleep up your sleeve, an Ambien ready,
bedding is ambient setting- upping for grabs,
crazy opening...like this bro

Dominican rain. summer recitals. Aruarian- shuffle.
meaning washes your memory. notes colored, shuttled,
start again slow. ponds from a puddle. let motion elapse.
but the static just snows, globe in muddled old glass


Vesuvian labryinth lapped in the magma-red birth,
wide-eyed at crossroads, a meeting, an animus quirk...
world developing scenes, beneath you a skeleton key,
an orchard in autumn, formed in a collection of turns,
wisdom falling like leaves, you've been here but-
every step is your first


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