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Old 01-06-2014, 02:56 PM   #1
Defy Gravity
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Default An Insurgent Soul in Flames

Burn me Alive


Posing as an imposter,
Altering permanent mannerisms and mixed posture/
I rose to grandiose fame a flying saucer,
In the underworld canvass of colliding mobsters/
With matriculate dames and narcotics fueling my insidious name/
Until my status lift to a hydraulics gaze,
I marched brolic with a quiverless rein/
My origin was wiped clean by the authorities that were over seeing
All shady agents who a sang amazing grace if my cover came stampeding/
My intense training academy,
sealed off keeping moles for straddling me/
An extreme athlete,
Baiting the bulls horn like a matador hosting a Calvary/
Vocal coached the accent, my Italian pantomimes were immaculate/
All heathens exorcised in action flicks,
bathe in Sinai swallowing the apple's stem/
carving their coronary arteries, my blade work was artistry/
I graze preps horribly,
With scarlet stabbing objects perspiring lava beads/
Close their coffins,
Restless souls disrupt the earth like erosion coughing/
And their body moldings forfeit,
Substances for my hands to rinse under cold water faucets/
My glock is global warming with heated shots that hoist a walrus/
You’ll be eaten like roasted swordfish,
Or drowning divers splashing in open water/
My Arsenal is opulent,
With particles of toxicness causing gray shaded flesh/
And as my accomplices,
A Xerox a copy of oxygen for suffocation occupants negated breathes/
My body is astonishing,
The ink display turns into army fatigues and hieroglyphics/
Watching me fight at a sonic speed,
Displays a collage of green berets firing missiles/
No damage inflicted, my stamina in trenches is titanium tinted/
My hands are like syphilis, fedora keeps my cranium, visage
From miscellaneous henchmen/
Die violently, slugs collide turning guys into a side of beef/
After tasting the five finger rings,
We douse his eyes with vinegar and Vaseline/
Kerosene soaked his clothes, in cement blocks his toes were cloaked/
Fisticuffs the blows were stone, in anemic drops his blood it flows/
Toss a match as his body regurgitates his carcass to ashes/
The cause and effect, an undercover insurgent soul lost in the madness




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Hopefully without offending anybody, Defy Gravity has created the most impressive initial submission from a new user to join the competition. Outperformed his opponent in terms of rhyme scheme
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