[Defy Gravity]

"Symbiotic foreigners muse, transfixed on a transformative mutant cyst
both fascinated yet vacillated by how our mortal corridors stoop and bend
Salute, extend their barrels, hearing roars from a ruger's lid
Oral quarrels borne from reddened Orvilles torn from the Reuter's list"

I was a little lost on this part but the flow was so amazing i couldnt help but quote it.



"getting separate endorsements for dismembering corpses
no matter how tempting the sorceress or her tempestuous auspices
Why's my block against your block? This game of Tetris is borderless
Ancient zeppelins ought to drift by the same electrical water grids
embrace the mantle of your inner sanctums: death to the lawlessness"

Your use of pop reference and wordplay always makes your pieces entertaining.


"Exiled to Titan for being a too-tightened screw
Genderless martians crept through the mosses of a blue-lichened moon
accompanied only by the sound of the Foo Fighter's tunes"

Dope references as usual.


"A towering vision, a Taoist admission
replete with Visipanna towels and ribbons"

dope dope dope


"yet reminiscent of Howl's Moving Castle conditions
if a lack of oxygen was reason enough for Calcifer's dimming"

now your picking up the pace


"Why does passion diminish?
There's nothing as devout as a sentence
NASA didn't build a space ship called "You."
They didn't put it out of commission
The planet doesn't rotate because it's part of a modeling agency
It spins to generate a searchlight capable of scouting for vacancy
Cumulus clouds cruise at safest speeds for hours, debatably
Announcement to sacred seas: The age of bountiful rain proceeds"


some soul searching message to people searching for their solidarity? The wordplay and references made this piece enjoyable. i like it but was confused at times and it seemed complicated at the beginning.