[Simon SeversTons]

My conclusion:

Jimmy - Okay, the first the line was nice wordplay with wrecks/rex Ryan. Thought it was ehh. Your second liner, I wasnt feeling that. I felt like you couldve written a different liner that stood out. Your 3rd liner was confusing because Jimmy Johns is suppose to be a pizza place, probably you didnt know that but yeah... that was a fail. Always have your refs on point. Your 4th line was filler, no direction of attack, no angle, not nothing I felt that was targeted at Ryan. The 5th line was a bit better than your other two lines, but it was meh/ehh after awhile, couldve rewritten it in a better way to make it a bit impactful. Your final line was generic, but a flip on his name again... not a bad verse, its mediocre at best, but I expected a bit more directed at me with punches more than wordplay.

Ryan 12 - Your opener was decent. I thought you and Jimmy started the openers decent. You couldve did more on the opener though. Even though your second line wasnt a nameflip nor a personal attack, it still dissed him but you need to say something thats not basic. Your third liner, was a hilarious jab but it still didnt work for me, sorta felt like a filler again, couldve brought more to the table that targets Jimmy. Your 4th line is ehh lol but the line was a bit better than the last two fillers you posted. 5th line was basic, but its props for trying... couldve did more with the nameflip to make it impactful towards Jimmy, the line comes off as basic and tasteless. Nevertheless, this was a chill battle, both had mess ups in a few lines, and points made.

MVGT: Ryan 12