holy fuck man the amount of words in this is incredible. i dont even know dude, that seemed psychobabble to me for the most part, i don't doubt your really smart. liked this line:
The planet doesn't rotate because it's part of a modeling agency
It spins to generate a searchlight capable of scouting for vacancy
just the concept of that alone. really good. i'd say filter your stuff into more cohesive and understandable bars
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