Nice writing overall, I like how you make braggadocio sound casual. Accomplishing the approach without turning the volume up so high or beating the war drum phonetically.
Favorite part:
"My style is precise at catching errors like a tax assessor.
This is task force Kappa Delta - we’re reading active sensors in the Alpha sector, wait Zygote has escaped, activate all Satnav antennas."
lol
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