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Originally Posted by CymbiCort
It took me 3 months to acknowledge this fag wanted to battle me
Now watch as I make 'Phuck Come To an End" like Penis Amputees
^ This was ehh... a bit corny and really played.
My Strategies to leave you lifeless like used dry cells
Should I send anthrax to his crib..? nahhhh, he already got killed by Mael..
^ This was another ehh line. Couldve done more.
last night my dick went between your mom's titties
Bag on her head to Void' coming to An ugly Conclusion like Yew vs .my dog, Witty.
^ Word play on Bags, Void, Conclusion... not bad.
I'm ready to bomb ya riders while my dick drips wit ya moms saliva
And leave Phuck dead in a hole like necrophiliacs with Saddams Advisors
^ Didnt like this line. Really forced. Bad line you wrote.
You look like Shrek.do chicks a favor. Give In to ya Health
In ur Pic battle with Rican I couldn't tell if you were dissing Him or Yourself!
^ Got a chuckle out of me. Line was ehh.
Cym.
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Tbh... My conclusion:
Phuck Yew - Had bars and a set of multisyllable rhymes. Several lines did hit but they were a little light yet still were average at best. Felt like you couldve came from a different angle and approach to overcome Cymbicort officially. Not definitiely your best bars though.
Cymbicort - You started off a bit rocky in your opener. But managed to succeed to pull out some hitters, felt like you forced a whole alot of times like that saddam line. Yeah, I wasnt feeling that line. You need to write and think more carefully before youre okay with the stuff you post. Nevertheless, this battle shows potential.
MVGT: Phuck Yew.