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Old 01-04-2014, 04:37 PM   #4
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To travel time is elementary. Blackboards are backward,
They aren’t meant to be black: chalk comes in much colour,
We saw only white at our schools;
interesting set of lines here...no doubt the skills are on point..everything else as well..this feels like most of your piece ive read from you..but I have a feeling its just me though and not something you try to create...am I wrong?...but your thought process seems to be all over the place but with a calmness about it I cant explain lol. I almost find myself reading your pieces really fast...I like that...I like that your writing makes me do something I don't normally do...means you doing your job and keeping my attention thoroughly...dope ish man...wish youd post more.
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