You fold like paper when I pick apart your broken nature,
Criticizing every facet of your own behavior.
Your skill is like an ice cube - mine is like a frozen glacier so grand in stature it could span the whole equator.
Unloading chambers to change your skull into a smoking crater.
all real nice man...that glacier spannin the whole equator line was nasty
My style is basically excessive hyperbole designed perfectly,
My grammar is fine and I write with a dire Certainty, the rhymes in each line can fry thermally your mind circuitry.
hyperbole designed perfectly is a little choppy of a word combo, so it messes with the flow a little in my opinion...but that's just me since i'm more of a flow based writer. aside from that...another ill section.
I write with a wide diversity, Vulgar would describe it as a Persian caravan adventure from Samarkand to Mecca.
You’re just a basement dweller, your Grandma’s cellar is your hacienda.
i'm not on here enough to know of the vulgar reference, so i wasn't feelin' the first line...but the second line is funny as shit...g1
Unbeatable like an acapella, defeat opponents at my leisure and mute you like flash suppressor.
Raw enough to give you salmonella, attack defences in half a second to completely smash your center.
You’re a badly tempered transgendered sex offender clad in leather,
You make me sick – I’ll need an Alka-Seltzer just to stand your presence.
Put opponents under massive pressure like a trash compressor,
I grow tired with your bland conjecture, what you craft is boring,
What I craft is habit forming, it should come with flashing warnings.
nothing to say about any one line individually...feelin' all this shit...you're definitely nice with it yo.
overall i like it. just didn't get some of the references here and there and a couple lines i wasn't feelin..but way more shit i did like. flow was nailed in spots...and some solid imagery. good shit man.
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