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Old 01-04-2014, 08:09 AM   #3
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The different wording seems to be very precise and also concise. Enjoyed the economy of language and the different ways you were able to express things. E.g., "They aren’t meant to be black: chalk comes in much colour," - 'much colour' being a great diverse way to write, it would have been a lot less effective to word it like 'many colors.'
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