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Exis · 01-04-2014, 06:15 AM

I liked this...emotion is a stand out but you also have some nice imagery, if I'm bein' completely honest there's places where a few things could be tightened like word usage and so forth.It's good though, definitely a lot to like here and chea thought it was nice with it.

Thanks for the feed man,
Stay upwards.

01-04-2014, 06:15 AM	#7
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I liked this...emotion is a stand out but you also have some nice imagery, if I'm bein' completely honest there's places where a few things could be tightened like word usage and so forth.It's good though, definitely a lot to like here and chea thought it was nice with it. Thanks for the feed man, Stay upwards.