well...im not coming in here to say whats wrong with this piece because ultimately these 2 guys dont need critique from me..
dead man came with his usual stuff. the outrages usage of devices..the phrasing which i find so original i dont think i see
that aspect in any one else...or for that matter since ive been doing this. dead did an excellent job brining to life his character with
some a dope as progressino to his story. it was alive i tell yah lol..i felt like i was there is was im trying to say..in the end dead had
a really dope story with some outstanding wording sprinkled with some dope flow...storyline was dope as well.
mean while poh..seemd to focus on the flow and story as one... man that shit flowd like watter..and the story never seemed to lack which
is something most do not do well..obviously you have talent cuz you pulled that off without a hitch.
in the end im going with what i always go with...its a topical league right?...so im going with whos story was more appealing to me.
ive read both verse a couple times through out the week and in the end i keep going back to poh. i thought his rhyming and storytelling
was justt something to marvel at...i mean dam on the other side...dead dropped some real cool shit..with a touch of originality...
in the end im leaning towards poh..
great battle guys...
AOB legendary battle?
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