[Adonis]

"Honestly, to me, neither verse was much good. Dear diary followed by heavy rhyme scheme was simply a bad play. What I mea is the sentences are how anyone would sensibly write in a diary iMo. Frank, you wrote in a pure writer tense, I didn't much enjoy. It was different I can say the least, solid attempt, just not appeasing to my taste at all aside from the fact that it was a different approach. I want to be constructive, but I will be honest and leave it at I didn't enjoy them

Vote frank for having a slightly more intriguing verse IMO