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Old 01-02-2014, 09:11 AM   #4
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Originally Posted by Just Write View Post
Love.. is a voidless emotion,
Ive sat here poised and toyed with the notion
That maybe it's the thought of love..
...that's poison is potent.
I'm hopeless..
Hopelessly lost, hopeless in thoughts
Hopelessly hoping it was all worth the cost
Tossing and turning, yet yearning for love
A church on the hill, a silloquette of doves
Ive hugged this pillow tight, thoughts of you
on a yatcht at noon. Coffee for two
En-capsulated beauty, it's essence fulfilled
Crimson silk sheets meshed with a tinge of filth
Oh the sin was real, i pinned you against the steel oven
Still smell a hint of garlic and the scent of grilled onions
^^Ill.

I've been a fan of your shit for a minute now and it's verses like this that back that up perfectly....you somehow seem to lace pieces with an incredible amount of wit with such ease that it makes me sick lol...the imagery in here is sweet as, paintin' pictures with words shouldn't be made to look so simple and yet you do it effortlessly and more importantly on a consistent basis...this was fire my friend, we should collaborate sometime.

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