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Originally Posted by Certain
The beat is good, your delivery is good and the lyrics are OK to good. But they don't all match up. You're going too fast and there are a few too many things going on in the beat for a song that supposedly has deep lyrics. Plus, the theme is pretty general and generic.
You have all the tools to do it, though, and this was a fine listen.
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thanks for the honest feedback, i'm gonna work on that thank you once again i take heed to all the advice and feedback i get!