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Old 03-04-2013, 08:52 PM   #14
Mike Wrecka
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good battle.

geno- way below what I expect to read from you. this was either keyed up quick or you were just not feeling it. iono. the story, didn't flow as well as your usual stuff and it was kinda boring. don't get me wrong, it wasn't a terrible verse, just way below your normal capabilities. overall, decent not great.

Campbell- strong verse man. your inconsistent. this was a week that you had everything going. I liked the take on the topic. and this line was slick

everything starts with a planted seed, which grows into fantasies
trees left standing, giant tall, branches brandish damaged leaves

branches brandish damaged leaves. awesome.

overall- it was close. but I got camp with a tremendous upset. thought his verse was deeper. and had some stand outs. good battle guys.

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